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Title: Breaking the Horrid Silence
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan
Fandom: White Collar
Rating: R
Characters/Pairings: Neal Caffrey/Peter Burke
Spoilers: None
Warnings/Enticements/Triggers: Reference to non-canonical death of canon character; implied dub-con.
Word Count: ~500
Summary: Consider this my anti-Valentine’s Day fic; this story was originally written for [livejournal.com profile] doctor_fangeek, another one for the Tropes Meme I did back in September. The prompt was “cell mates.” At one time, I thought about continuing this, and I still may.

A/N: Title from John Milton’s “Paradise Lost”.

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Everyone knew to stay away from Big Bad Peter Burke. Former Fed, former lawman, he was currently serving hard time for committing murder with his bare hands. The rumor in the yard was that he ripped the head and arms off of his wife's killer.

That wasn't far from the truth.

Neal Caffrey, world-class con man and forger, should never have been sent to a maximum security facility like Sing-Sing. Four years for bond forgery should have netted him a stay at some cushy Club Fed. But Neal was also an escape artist par excellence, and the high stone walls and razor wire of the castle-like penitentiary represented much more of a challenge.

Neal, terrified as he was, knew that he had to make the best of it, if he was going to survive. The screws who marched him down the midway delighted in telling him all about his vicious new cellmate, a lifer with nothing to lose.

As they approached the end of the long cellblock, the hoots and hollers faded away. A guard shouted at the cell's current occupant to stand with his hands on the wall and his feet apart. The cell door clanged as the lock was released. A sharp shove between his shoulder blades and Neal stumbled into the cell. The bars slammed shut and he was instructed to turn around and present his hands. Neal supposed that it wouldn't be a good idea to pick the cuffs and hand them to the guard, so he did as instructed.

They took off the cuffs and walked away, laughing. "We'll check on you in the morning, Caffrey. We don't expect to find you alive."

Neal looked around the small cell, trying not to stare at the large man in an orange jumpsuit, who nonchalantly sat down on the cell’s single chair and picked up a book - Milton’s Paradise Lost.

"So, you're the fresh meat I was told I was getting." Burke leaned back, legs incongruously, elegantly crossed.

Neal swallowed and introduced himself.

Burke laid out the realities to him. "This is no tea party, Caffrey. It's hell on earth and you don't strike me as a man who'll survive hard time without some help."

Neal knew this was coming. "I have connections; I can get things – whatever you want."

The shadows in his cellmate's eyes were surprising. "You can't get me what I want. No one can."

Neal took a deep breath and decided this was not the time to play games. "I want to stay alive and I know my chances are slim without protection. What's it going to cost me?"

Burke looked him up and down. "I suppose you think I'll want your pretty ass."

Neal just nodded.

"That'll do - for starters. I’ll have your mouth, too." Burke waited for the reality of that to sink in. When Neal started breathing again, he continued. "Outside of this cell, you always walk in my shadow, you do everything I tell you to do and you talk to no one. You want to live, you want to get out of here relatively sane and healthy, you’ll stick to me like fucking glue." Burke opened his book and started to read, as if Neal's answer meant nothing to him.

"Okay - I get it."

Burke turned the page and finally looked up. His off-hand reply sent chills down Neal’s spine. "Good. And remember, I own you - for the next four years."

FIN

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Date: 2013-02-14 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidchild.livejournal.com
Meep.

*pictures prison-AU-versions of canonical cases like the Dutchman*

Date: 2013-02-14 05:09 pm (UTC)
angelita26: (Neal!Tired)
From: [personal profile] angelita26
Ooooh! Chilling! But a world without El. That makes me so sad - for Peter and for Neal.

I'm fascinated - I hope you write more of this one. Thanks!

Date: 2013-02-14 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
GUH! Yes!!!

That is all.

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Date: 2013-02-14 05:44 pm (UTC)
embroiderama: (Tim DeKay - arms)
From: [personal profile] embroiderama
Oh wow, that last line--the way you used it gave me chills. Awesome.

Date: 2013-02-14 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] surreal-44.livejournal.com
Eeek! And wow! And OMG! And everything else! This is so good because it's so sad and terrible. Excellent!

Date: 2013-02-14 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultracape.livejournal.com
Chilling to say the least. But I'd love to see the next part, and hope you write it.

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Date: 2013-02-14 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamsofspike.livejournal.com
this is soooo chilling and dark :) your Peter is very much in character despite the AU, and there's something ridiculously hot about this version of Peter, hardened killer scary enough that even the guards are wary of him... I would love to read more in this verse :)

Date: 2013-02-14 07:40 pm (UTC)
sinfulslasher: (white collar peter wants you)
From: [personal profile] sinfulslasher
I just...um...that loud bang you heard? Was my brain. It exploded. Into a bajillion pieces.

Mind = blown.

Ficlet = brilliant piece of fucking perfection

I've always wanted to read prison!bitch!Neal fic but didn't really find many stories focusing on that trope. But now you not only filled this fangirl's need for yummy prison!bitch!Neal, you made Peter the bitch's owner!!! I may have flailed to death!!! :D :D :D

This is seriously addictive in its creepy, chilling, dark way. I really, really, REALLY hope you'll continue this. Pretty please? I'll add a nekkid, chocolate-covered Neal on top!

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Date: 2013-02-14 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] love-82.livejournal.com
Oh, I really like this! Very chilling but also kind of hot. And I agree with the comment above I like how Peter is still Peter at the heart of things. I would love to see how things play out in this AU.

This line broke my heart:

The shadows in his cellmate's eyes were surprising. "You can't get me what I want. No one can."

Peter without Elizabeth is just so sad.

Date: 2013-02-14 08:05 pm (UTC)
theatregirl7299: (Default)
From: [personal profile] theatregirl7299
Oh wow. Add this to that list for more sequels! I am such a Dark!Peter fan and this definitely pushes the buttons.

I agree - Peter is definitely in character here. Please ma'am, may we have some more?

Date: 2013-02-14 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com
Chilling but hot. Love how you twist around the possessiveness/power relations/consent issues in the show to this situation, and the ownership line especially. Hm, an interesting question, how dark Peter could go if El were killed and he sought vengeance.

Date: 2013-02-15 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauracollared.livejournal.com
Oh my.... wow.
That is all. I think. ha.

Date: 2013-02-15 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pooh-collector.livejournal.com
OHHHH! That literally sent a chill down my spine.

But it strikes me that even in this brutal version of WC Peter is still taking care of Neal. It's like it's fated or something.

Date: 2013-02-15 02:01 pm (UTC)
kanarek13: (Default)
From: [personal profile] kanarek13
Oooooh, chilling and dark, yet there is something gripping about it. The idea of Peter having all that power... over Neal... hmmmmmmm.

I'd definitely love to read more of this :D

Thank you :D

Date: 2013-02-15 02:09 pm (UTC)
kanarek13: (Default)
From: [personal profile] kanarek13
Can't wait \o/ *happy dance* :D

Date: 2013-02-15 02:46 pm (UTC)
sapphire2309: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sapphire2309
I don't believe for one second that Neal is going to be able to follow all the conditions set by Peter. Maybe just ignore one for form's sake?
I love the last line!
This is an interesting au that I would love to see explored in more detail by you.
This Peter is way darker than the canon and makes for an intriguing read. I'd love to see more of him even if you don't continue this au.

Date: 2013-02-15 10:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hurinhouse.livejournal.com
ah that last line. fantastc idea very well executed. i love the idea of neal gradually growing on peter, chipping away at the chip on his shoulder.

Date: 2013-02-16 12:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] citrinesunset.livejournal.com
Gotta admit, I enjoy dark!Peter. Your take on him is both chilling and darkly hot. And the thought of him and Neal being cellmates is really interesting.

I love this as a stand-alone fic, but I would also totally be interested if you were to write more on this premise!

Date: 2013-02-16 05:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hello-mcee.livejournal.com
AAAAHHHH great last line!

Date: 2013-02-16 07:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pipilj.livejournal.com
Fantastic beginning.
The shadows in his cellmate's eyes were surprising. "You can't get me what I want. No one can."
was heart breaking. Peter being hard as nails is so sad. hopefully Peter mellows down.
Edited Date: 2013-02-16 07:41 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-02-16 05:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] droodlebug.livejournal.com
Wow! That's dark and nasty and I love every bit of it, lol. Hope there is a follow-up coming.

Date: 2013-02-16 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pjna3.livejournal.com
Eeep! Wow, dark and chilling and yet strangely in character. I love the "Big Bad Peter Burke" nickname btw. :)

I would love to see this go in the direction of Neal healing Peter's soul, and Peter redeeming himself at least in his own eyes, if not necessarily the law's, through saving Neal somehow.

Date: 2013-02-16 09:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tjs-whatnot.livejournal.com
Man, for a minute I so confused myself. I have two of your fics open in tabs and thought I was reading the other one and wondering when Magic Mike came into play. o___O

But I figured it out and got totally swept away with this little piece of dark and also heart wrenching perfection. ♥

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Date: 2013-02-17 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joy2190.livejournal.com
How mean can you be? You took the lid off the box of chocolates and just left them sitting there on the counter. We can see them, we can smell them, but you want let us eat them just yet!! Please don't keep us waiting too long ...

Date: 2013-02-17 01:46 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Suprised that no one has commented on the title of the book Peter is reading "Paradise Lost". Just the title sums up both Peter's and Neal's life now. Not sure which way I want this to go, with Peter staying dark or finally (at least with Neal) lighting up. Neal could remind Peter of El with his dark hair, blue eyes, and intelligence. I can imagine Peter projecting the big bad wolf image as a form of self protection, isolation, and maybe a form of penance (doesn't deserve forgiveness/happiness/friends??). Although former Fed, it would be easy to think other immates "respect" his crime of killing his wife's killer. It would be ironic if it were Keller.
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