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Title: Such Very Good Friends - A Wonder(ful) Years Timestamp
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan
Fandom: White Collar
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Peter/Neal, OFC
Spoilers: None
Warnings/Enticements/Triggers: Sick!Fic
Word Count: ~1200
Summary: Part of the Wonder(ful) Years ‘verse (College Years A/U). Peter’s mom, Cathy, is surprised at how close Peter and Neal are, and how nurturing Peter has become.

A/N: For my friend [livejournal.com profile] coffeethyme4me, who has been a bit under the weather the past few days.

You probably do have to have some familiarity with this A/U to understand what's going on:

The Wonder(ful) Years
Sex On The Beach



__________________



After dinner on Thursday night, Cathy Burke waited for her weekly phone call from her son, Peter. Back when the boys were still living in the dorms, the phone would ring twice and hang up. She or Joe would call back, so Peter didn’t have to pay for the call. Since Neal bought a house and didn’t have to deal with the exorbitant long distance rates the phone company charged for student lines, they didn’t have to go through those shenanigans.

Not that they spent a long time on the phone – Peter always had something do to. Either studying or sports or going out. It was funny though, he never seemed to have a girlfriend or even talked about a girl. She had thought maybe her son will still pining over Elizabeth Mitchell, who had ended things just before the end of their senior year (and Cathy was still flabbergasted that she went to the prom with Neal’s weird little friend, Mozzie). But it wasn’t that.

Peter simply didn’t date. He went out either with “the guys” (who were never named) or with Neal. There was nothing that they didn’t do together. And Neal, to the best of her knowledge, didn’t date either. He studied, he worked on his art, and he hung out with Peter.

When the boys went off to Harvard about three years ago, Cathy had wondered if their recently repaired friendship would survive in that new environment. When she herself had gone away to school, she roomed with her best friend from high school. Their friendship and the housing arrangements didn’t survive the first semester. If Neal hadn’t been so young, and so clearly dependent on Peter, she would have cautioned her son against it, rooming with Neal was a bad idea and bound to destroy their friendship.

And yet it wasn’t a bad idea after all. They somehow avoided the problems of transitioning from a high school friendship to that of college roommates, and seemed to grow even closer. Peter and Neal were so close that she worried that the boys didn’t seem to have any close friends but each other. They were just about attached at the hip, like Siamese twins. She’d seen newly married couples who gave each other more breathing space than Peter and Neal.

When she talked to Joe about it, he shrugged. “Why are you so concerned? The boys are getting good grades; they aren’t doing drugs or having promiscuous sex.”

“And how would you know that?”

“I’ve asked them – well, I asked Neal when we went up to visit. Just wanted to make sure they weren’t going off the rails.”

“And you believed him?” Cathy was highly skeptical that a 17 year old boy, in the first months away from home, would tell his best friend’s father the truth about his recreational activities.

“Yes, hon. I believe him. Neal would never lie to me. And he wasn’t trying to misdirect me either. They go out together, have a few drinks, flirt, have some fun with the girls and go back to the dorm. They’re both on pretty intensive academic tracks, and Peter’s got to maintain his grades for his scholarship – so yeah, when Neal tells me they aren’t interested in fucking up, I believe him.”

All through that first semester, Cathy remained skeptical, but her husband was probably right. Neither of the boys had been inclined to wild behavior in high school and she was probably doing them a disservice by thinking they’d go a little crazy at the first taste of freedom.

Neal grew into himself very quickly – by the time they came home for Thanksgiving, he shone with a rougish charm that took her breath away. He flirted with her, and if she didn’t consider herself his surrogate mother, she might have flirted back – just to see what would happen. Joe, bless his heart, was oblivious. Peter, who also seemed to gather maturity like an old tree gathers moss, would just smile and shake his head at Neal’s antics.

She eventually stopped worrying and simply accepted that Peter and Neal were two sides of the same coin. You couldn’t have one without the other. Time would work to separate them gently. That was the way of the world, wasn’t it?

The phone finally rang – it was close to eleven and Cathy was getting worried. It wasn’t like Peter to call so late. Joe had gone to bed an hour ago, but she was a night owl and rarely turned in before one in the morning, staying up to watch Carson and then The Late Show. The phone rang shrilly and she picked it up before the first ring finished.

“Peter?”

“Sorry, Mom – didn’t mean to call so late.”

“I was worried, sweetheart. Is everything okay?” Mother’s instinct was telling her that something was wrong.

“It’s Neal – he’s really sick.”

“Has he been to the infirmary?” Cathy was a little relieved. She loved Neal like a son, but she was also grateful it wasn’t Peter.

“Yeah – he has pneumonia.”

Now she was worried again – that was serious. “Is he in the hospital?”

“No, mom – we’re at home. I’ve been taking care of him.”

“Oh, honey – that so good of you.” And a little strange. “But you shouldn’t get sick yourself.”

“I’m drinking a lot of orange juice, taking extra vitamin C and showering frequently.”

“You’re not skipping classes to take care of Neal?”

“No – I’m not.” But he probably was and wouldn’t tell her.

“Is there anything I can do?”

“Well, yeah.” From the tone of his voice, that maternal instinct was telling her that whatever he was about to ask was probably a little embarrassing. She could see Peter standing there, rubbing the back of her neck.

“What – what do you need?”

“Can I have your chicken soup recipe?”

Cathy was so flabbergasted she had nothing to say.

Peter continued in a rush. “Neal is having trouble eating and I thought soup would help. But he hates the canned stuff, says it tastes like aluminum foil. So I thought I could make him some real soup – if it wasn’t too difficult.”

Cathy felt her heart melt. When Peter was little and he had a bad cold, all he ever wanted to eat was her chicken soup. “It’s really not difficult, but you’ve got to start with the right type of chicken…”

She finished giving him the recipe, listened while he read it back to her, and finally offered him some pointers. “Call me if you run into trouble, okay?”

“Thanks, Mom – you’re the best.”

“Love you, sweetheart. Tell Neal I’m worried and to get well soon. And that I love him too, okay?”

“Sure thing.”

She hung up the phone and stared at it. When did her son become so nurturing? She smiled and thought he’d make some girl a wonderful husband some day. Pity that Neal was a boy – they were otherwise the perfect couple.

FIN

Date: 2012-05-02 04:26 am (UTC)
sahiya: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sahiya
Awwww, this was really cute! Moms are so clueless sometimes.

(Now I really want the fic where Peter makes soup and fusses over Neal and fluffs his pillow, etc. *puppy eyes* Pleeeeeeeeaaaase?)

Date: 2012-05-02 05:11 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] leonie_alastair
Interesting - I wonder how Cathy and Joe are going to react when Peter and Neal come out as a couple. I love this series.

Date: 2012-05-02 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pooh-collector.livejournal.com
Ode to oblivious moms! So like a mom to worry about all the possible things that could be going wrong whether it is necessary or not. This was definately another sweet addition to this verse.

Now, can you write it from the other side, Peter taking care of his poor, sick pneumoniafied Neal? Pretty please.

Date: 2012-05-02 03:39 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-05-02 07:38 am (UTC)
kanarek13: (Default)
From: [personal profile] kanarek13
Awwww... who would've thought that the image of young Peter trying to make home-made chicken soup for sick Neal would melt me into a puddle in a matter of seconds :P :P :P

And YAY for oblivious moms :D Thank you, this is such a sweet story and the whole Wonder(ful) Years verse is a winner \o/

And yes, now I'm just dying to read about Peter actually making that soup and taking care of sick Neal... :P

Date: 2012-05-02 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauracollared.livejournal.com
Oh, I am so glad to hear that you are writing the reverse, and more time stamps! I think this is one of my most favorite 'verses ever. I adore this Neal/Peter relationship.

Date: 2012-05-02 11:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
Aww at the idea of Peter making chicken soup for Neal. Sweet. And Cathy's worries seem realistic to me, even if they're not quite fully informed of what's going on.

Date: 2012-05-02 11:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gnomi.livejournal.com
I wonder if Joe has an inkling about Peter and Neal's relationship.

This was adorable!

Date: 2012-05-02 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauracollared.livejournal.com
Haha, I thought that too! He "got" it but let her keep being confused because he didn't know how to tell her. ha.

Date: 2012-05-02 07:10 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-05-08 08:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebeneezerdark.livejournal.com
One of the stories in the works is their coming out.

Oh, good. I like Joe and Cathy, and hope they are accepting of the relationship...

Date: 2012-05-02 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] ivorysilk
Awww, this was *adorable*!!

Date: 2012-05-02 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctor-fangeek.livejournal.com
I loved the original piece in this 'verse - all the parts were great - but I think this may be my favorite one of all. I love Peter's sweet and caring but oblivious mom. I was also wondering, as an earlier commenter mentioned, whether his dad might know (or at least suspect) a bit more. :-) I love nurturing Peter. But I especially love some of the little character moments - Peter's mom picturing him rubbing the back of his neck, nervous and embarrassed about asking for the recipe (I could picture that so easily in my mind's eye), and Neal becoming, well, Neal, with charm to spare.

Looking forward to more in this 'verse.

Date: 2012-05-02 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maiac.livejournal.com
Hm, is Cathy oblivious because she's (not overtly, but deep-down-inside) hoping for grandchildren? She seems like the type of terrific mom who will make a terrific grandmother.

Peter's parents are as adorable as Peter is. Poor sick Neal! I bet Peter had a time getting Neal to admit he was sick enough to go to the infimary.

Date: 2012-05-02 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maiac.livejournal.com
So "You're really strong!" applies to AU teen!Peter as much as to Agent Burke. :-)

Date: 2012-05-02 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] micheleeeex.livejournal.com
Awww, I love this!

Date: 2012-05-02 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauracollared.livejournal.com
Can't wait for more timestamps and the reverse POV in this story!

Peter's mom feels really realistic to me too. :) Love this!

Date: 2012-05-02 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daniel-shadow.livejournal.com
I love this so very much!!

Date: 2012-05-02 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyrose42.livejournal.com
Love it! More please.

Date: 2012-05-03 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pipilj.livejournal.com
Love Peter taking care of Neal.

Date: 2012-05-03 07:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tinnuial.livejournal.com
Awwwww this is so sweet! I just blew through the entire series and it has got to be the tenderest AU I've read. Love it to bits! Especially how Moz and El got together :P Will Cathy and Joe ever find out about Neal and Peter?

Date: 2012-05-03 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pfyre.livejournal.com
Kind of wonder when Mrs. Burke will catch the clue train *G* - do love this - love that Mr. Burke trust Neal to not lie to him - all good stuff

Date: 2012-05-08 08:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebeneezerdark.livejournal.com
This series: I want to take it home and have its babies.

*purrr*

Having been college-age just a bit ahead of the boys (class of '81), a lot of this is familiar. Our family used a similar tactic for 'phone calls back in the "BCE" (Before Cell-phones Era). Clever way to set the scene, time-wise.

Itty typo here: Peter always had something *do to*. ...should be to do.

And another here: [Neal] shone with a rougish charm... ...should be rogue-ish, I think...

Love the image of awkward!Peter standing there, rubbing the back of her neck. ...but should be his neck, even if his mom is subconsciously thinking of him as "mothering" Neal... and another "SQUEEE!" for her thinking they'd be a perfect couple if Neal were a girl...

Now pardon me... there's another story to read!
::bounces off to read more::

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