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Title: Tea and Soldiers
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan
Fandom: Sherlock (BBC)
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: John Watson, Sherlock Holmes, implied John/Sherlock
Spoilers: None
Warnings/Enticements/Triggers: None
Word Count: ~1000
Summary: John had a really bad day, all he wants is some peace and quiet. Written for [livejournal.com profile] ladygray99 in response to her prompt on my meme. This is the first SH fic I’ve ever written, and the first non-White Collar fanfic I’ve published in years. No beta. All mistakes are mine and mine alone.



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It had been more years than he cared to count since a patient died on him. Well, in the civilian world. John had lost too many men and quite a few women – in Kandahar, in Kabul, in Korengal Valley. But not in London.

Shortly before lunch, a young man staggered into the clinic, complaining of a stiff neck, headaches and extreme sensitivity to light. He filled out the forms, collapsed into a seizure and was dead before anyone realized what was happening. It wasn’t until John opened his shirt and saw the purple-blue waves of a petechial rash covering the lad’s body that he understood what he was dealing with – an advanced case of meningitis.

The aftermath was, in its way, almost worse than a battlefield cleanup. The boy had died in a waiting room filled with people – many with already compromised immune systems. Everyone – patients and staff – needed to be treated with antibiotics and antivirals, the BIS had to be called in, follow-ups and paperwork to fill out. A bloody, fucking nightmare.

John left clinic, contemplated getting on the Underground and realized what a completely awful idea that would be. Except that his wallet was empty, his credit cards all over drawn and it was a two mile hike back to Baker Street. He supposed he could catch a cab and get the fare from Sherlock when he got home.

Except it was rush hour and he couldn’t get a cab to save his own life. At least it wasn’t raining.

The walk really wasn’t that bad, considering. Nothing else went wrong – he didn’t trip or get mugged or find himself in the middle of something he didn’t want to get involved in. The last of which was the norm these days if Sherlock was with him.

Mrs. Hudson called out a cheerful greeting and John grunted a reply, climbed the stairs to the apartment. It was too much to hope that his flat mate was out. He loved Sherlock, but there were times that the man pushed the wrong buttons at the wrong time. Tonight, all he wanted was a cup of very strong tea, perhaps augmented with a generous splash of Scotland’s best, and to fall asleep to the sounds of a rugby game coming from the television. If Sherlock was home, that would be unlikely.

As John put his key in the lock, he listened carefully for the sounds of mayhem and quite possibly madness. Sherlock hadn’t had a case in weeks, and his descent into ennui could be fatal for the plaster and lathe and wallpaper. John heard nothing and turned the key, but was still cautious as he opened the door.

There was no sign of Sherlock, but there was music playing. Something soft and intricate. John listened for a moment and recognized the piece as Bach. Sherlock must have left the stereo playing before he went out. John stood there, letting the sound flow through him.

A shower first, then tea.

The water was hot and plentiful, two things that John never took for granted anymore. Not after Afghanistan and the horrors of the so-called sanitary facilities there (a boy from the Orkneys was electrocuted in the shower – bloody fucking contractors got away with murder). But no such dangers here. The near-scorching water flowed over him, easing tight muscles, washing away the sense of failure at that kid’s death. Logically, he knew that there was nothing he could have done to save the boy – but still. It all seemed so damn unfair.

The hot water wasn’t infinite after all, and when he opened the shower curtain, he couldn’t help but notice a mug on the sink top, filled with dark liquid that looked suspiciously like tea. He dried off, wrapped himself in his old robe and picked up the mug. A careful sniff and he could deduce the contents – tea (his favorite Assam blend) and yes, a smoky hint of whiskey. The first sip was … ambrosia.

John went back into the living room, was greeted by Vivaldi this time and the rather delicious odor of toast and marmalade and butter. Sherlock came out of the kitchen holding a plate stacked with toast soldiers and gave John a single directive.

“Sit.”

Helpless to do anything except obey, he dropped onto the couch. Sherlock handed him the plate and John felt the tiniest prickle of tears behind his eyes. They stared at each other for a handful of long, drawn out seconds. John recalled a bit of ancient lore - never thank the fairies. He nodded and Sherlock gave the slightest nod back. He took the plate and started to eat. There was a reason why it was called comfort food.

Replete and just slightly drunk, John leaned back and closed his eyes. The sounds of baroque strings were replaced by the low voices of the announcers for the match of the day. He couldn’t bring himself to shift as Sherlock sat down next to him.

John didn’t resist as hands tugged at him, and he sort of fell-drifted sideways, his head landing on a lap. Sherlock’s lap. As he fell asleep, long fingers combed through his hair and he thought he heard Sherlock say, “Tomorrow, it gets better.”

FIN

Date: 2012-04-13 03:58 pm (UTC)
leonie_alastair: B/W Avedon captures a model w/umbrella in midair leaping over a puddle (Default)
From: [personal profile] leonie_alastair
What a lovely comfort fic!

Date: 2012-04-13 05:51 pm (UTC)
kendermaus: house mouse designs, mouse under blue flower, mouth open waiting for a dew drop to fall from the flower into it's mouth (Default)
From: [personal profile] kendermaus
lovely fic. And Sherlock does have his moments, doesn't he? ::pets the detective who did REALLY good this time::

Loved John's thought about "don't thank the fairies" - it fits for Sherlock's otherworldly nature that John's tired mind would pull that thought. And that Sherlock would respond well to it. So very Sherlock.

And i loved how thoughtful Sherlock was without being OOC. The brusk "Sit", the various little things done without fanfare or fuss (which is such a nice contrast to Sherlock's over-dramatic 'fits' - and show, imho, how sincere the actions for John are) make them so much more telling and powerful. I loved the end line... So wonderfully sweet. And you know that Sherlock will do everything in his power to make that prediction a truth.

wonderful story.

pax,
km

Date: 2012-04-13 03:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
Oh wow, that was beautiful!!!! I feel treated. :-D Congratulations on a great first Sherlock piece. Although, what do I know, really? Still. I know the characters enough to know how good this is. Thank you!

Date: 2012-04-13 04:04 pm (UTC)
ladygray99: (SherlockMycroft)
From: [personal profile] ladygray99
Oh that's just lovely. Poor John. There really is nothing he could have done about meningitis but that wouldn't have made him feel better.

And

never thank the fairies

That really is perfect. Sherlock wouldn't put up with something as mundane as thanks. He'd probably give a logical, non feeling excuse about why he was being nice no John.

You should write more of these two.

Date: 2012-04-13 04:10 pm (UTC)
embroiderama: (Sherlock)
From: [personal profile] embroiderama
I love how you show the weight of John's bad day and then the low-key comfort--beautiful!

Date: 2012-04-13 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rchan.livejournal.com
*wobble eyes* AW! For your first branching out from WC, that was beautiful. I almost teared up along with you at the end there, John! *_* Very sweet and I love how Sherlock was just *there*, using his massive intellect to take care of John's every need and desire before he even knows he needs it. Who needs telepathy when you're Sherlock Holmes? ;)

Date: 2012-04-13 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elainasaunt.livejournal.com
What a lovely lovely thing to lull me off to a long overdue sleep!

*wants to come poke through your WIPS folder*

Date: 2012-04-13 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dmk0064.livejournal.com
You know how much I love you, now? You watch Sherlock? You write Sherlock? I love you, love you, love you? Have you seen series 2 yet? (I have, no spoilers except to say it is wonderful!).

Thanks for the read - always nice to visit my other favorite bromance!

Date: 2012-04-13 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dmk0064.livejournal.com
No illegal download for me either - I bought the blu rays from amazon.uk. It took a little to watch them because even though they were region free they were PAL and I only have NTSC. So with my hubby's help we figured out how to watch on the computer! They should be shown on PBS in May.

Date: 2012-04-14 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maiac.livejournal.com
PBS will be showing Season 2 of Sherlock, as a Masterpiece series, beginning May 6. Check your local schedule! (My local station will be re-running the Season 1 episodes on the three Mondays preceding the Season 2 premiere, so yours may, too.)

Date: 2012-04-13 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyrose42.livejournal.com
WOW, I could so feel sympathico with John after a bad day. Losing a patient is never good, and having to be productive afterwards is equally difficult. You captured it with very few words. That his flatmate could read his moods and meet his unspoken needs is so elegantly portrayed. Thanks for such a short but with much feeling story.

Date: 2012-04-13 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starshine24mc.livejournal.com
Lovely! Of course anyone who's been playing with "the smartest guys in the room" over there in the White Collar Crime Division should have no problem with the UK version *L*

My first step into the Sherlock pool was actually a Sherlock/WC Crossover. I'd love to see Peter and John have a sit down!

Thanks for this!

Date: 2012-04-14 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starshine24mc.livejournal.com
I can't wait to see what you come up with!

Plus, cos, you know I'm a shameless self promoter, my own little WC moment:
http://www.angelfire.com/oh4/homeofthegoddess/sherlockwhitecollar1.html

Cheers!

Date: 2012-04-13 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com
Love this! Love that Sherlock just sort of makes comfort APPEAR and then is like "what? don't be tedious, take your comfort."

And the little orders he gives. And of course he knows exactly what happened. Love it.

Date: 2012-04-14 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damietta.livejournal.com
Never thank the fairies...what a great line.

You did a wonderful job! I really felt John's dispair (and the rain and walk home added to that). That part made me think of blue and black washed out colors. When he got back to the apartment it became browns and oranges. Might be the wine I'm drinking.

Can't wait to read more Sherlock/John, etc. from you!

Date: 2012-04-14 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damietta.livejournal.com
Thank you. My mom had a minor stroke (are they ever minor?) and I've been helping her close down her business. She's doing great and just started driving again (thank goodness). Then a good friend had to have part of her thumb removed (egads!) due to bad arthritis so a bunch of us have been helping her.

But, yes, I'm back! Thank you for asking.

Date: 2012-04-14 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maiac.livejournal.com
This is lovely. It's so very much in character for John and for Sherlock.

Date: 2012-04-14 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tj-teejay.livejournal.com
Eeeee, you wrote Sherlock! I'm excited!! *bobs up and down* Okay, well, less excited that it's implied slash, but, hey, it's Sherlock! And this was really well done, I love it. Now I wish I had given you a gen prompt for Sherlock myself. *sigh* (Then again, why would you want to write gen?) ;-)

Date: 2012-04-14 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tj-teejay.livejournal.com
Can I? Well, not that I feel very inspired. It'll be angsty and h/c-y. You know me, right? :-P I better go do it in the right post.

Date: 2012-04-15 08:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebeneezerdark.livejournal.com
I know one shouldn't thank the faeries... but I'll damn well thank the fanfic writer! This was sweet. And YAY for your first foray into a new fandom!

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