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Title: Implacable
For: MMOM - Thirty (One) Dirty Words - Prompt 011 - Silk
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan
Fandom: White Collar
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Peter Burke, Neal Caffrey (Peter/Neal)
Spoilers/Episode References: None
Warnings/Enticements/Triggers: None
Word Count: 300 Exactly
Summary: Bound and blindfolded, there are orders that must be obeyed.

This is also a gift to the incomparable [livejournal.com profile] hoosierbitch for her Five Acts Meme, #3: Submissives who revel in their submission.



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The blindfold was silk, the corset, leather. He waited, hard, wanting, eager. His excitement and the tight bindings made it difficult to breathe.

“Touch yourself, Neal.”

His heart sang at that voice – so stern, so beloved. Three words and compliance was ensured.

Neal gently brushed his fingers against his cock. He didn’t touch bare skin, though. Peter had wrapped his penis and balls in the softest silk – it was tissue thin but strong, gathered and tied like a present for someone.

“Harder, Neal.”

He could feel his precome wet the silk – it wasn’t just the command, it was the way Peter said his name; to ensure that Neal remained Neal, and did not become a shadow of some other persona.

He squeezed his dick through the silk covering, and rubbed his thumb across the head. He panted, unable to get enough air into his lungs. He pulled and stroked, always aware of Peter, watching and judging. He hoped he wasn’t found wanting.

Neal panted and pulled and grew dizzy.

“Do you want to come, Neal?”

His name, always his name. He nodded, breathless.

“Tell me what you want.”

Neal fought for air, but kept stroking himself, the wet silk now an irritant. “I want you to touch me.” He paused, seeking air. “I need your mouth on my cock.”

Peter laughed. “I bet you’d like that.”

Neal rubbed harder, faster, and begged. “Please.” In the darkness behind the mask, he didn’t know if he was fading out. “Please.” His hands slowed. “Please, Peter. I need … you.”

Peter didn’t answer and Neal’s universe was reduced to the hot wetness of his cock under his hand and the hot wetness of tears running down his face.

He struggled for one more breath, and as he came, it was stolen by a kiss.

FIN


Date: 2011-05-11 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidchild67.livejournal.com
OMG, hotness. BRB...

*heads to bunk*

Date: 2011-05-11 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
FLAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2011-05-11 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
Okay, I've composed myself. This is one of THE HOTTEST things you've ever written, woman. You should write a fic for B, like, twice a month at least! 'Cause WHOA!!!!!!!!!! His dick. Is wrapped. In silk. By Peter. As a present FOR Peter. And he comes inside it. IN A CORSET!!!!!!!!

I need a sequel that features the corset as the star next. :-9 :-D \o/

Date: 2011-05-11 11:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
W00T!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2011-05-11 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com
YUM. LOVE it. subby Neal is win

Date: 2011-05-16 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elainasaunt.livejournal.com
Yes yes yes.

Date: 2011-05-11 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lionessvalenti.livejournal.com
Guh. This is so gorgeous, but I especially love the focus on Peter constantly using Neal's name.

Date: 2011-05-11 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] samueljames
Scorching. Very nicely done. I love how focused Neal is on Peter's commands.

Date: 2011-05-11 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jrosemary.livejournal.com
Ohmygosh--wow!

His heart sang at that voice – so stern, so beloved.

I think my heart sang too!

Date: 2011-05-12 03:34 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-05-12 08:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cwitch.livejournal.com
He struggled for one more breath, and as he came, it was stolen by a kiss.

Beautiful, hot, not my fandom, no idea who these men are, but WOW!

Date: 2011-05-12 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cwitch.livejournal.com
That is some lovely canon to work with. And so are the gentlemen above. I have seen the man on the left before, but the one on the right - Oh my! Those eyes alone could fluster a girl right out of her ... You get the picture. *checks TV listings*

Date: 2011-05-12 02:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cwitch.livejournal.com
Jonesy! That's why he looked so familiar. As I recall, he had a luscious body beneath all that grime.

If Mr. Matt can act half as well as he gets my attention, I think it will be worth a watch, despite the fact that I haven't been happy with USA's fare in quite a while. Thanks so much for the rec.

Date: 2011-05-16 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afiawri.livejournal.com
Whew! *fans self* Hot, hot stuff! <3

Date: 2011-05-19 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashfanatic22.livejournal.com
Oh my God! I think the hotness of this fic just killed me!! The fact that it was really short and still extremely red-HOT is amazing! :D

Date: 2012-04-30 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laesmeralda.livejournal.com
*ded*

Even though the Neal in my head doesn't go total sub, I'm completely on board with the way the Neal in your head does.

Neal’s universe was reduced to the hot wetness of his cock under his hand and the hot wetness of tears running down his face.

Wonderful!

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