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Just found this in today's New York Times - Complaint Box | Public Smooching

"I can handle sidewalk hand-holding, even an occasional long hug. But there is something about watching people suck each other’s lips on public transportation that just does not do it for me. The more this irks me, the more I realize these exhibitionists are everywhere: in line at the Guggenheim, in the hygiene aisle at CVS. I recently hid my face in a magazine at the laundromat to block my view of a guy and gal making out against a dryer. Are New Yorkers so busy that they have to do their lovemaking on the go?"

I guess she wouldn't have been too happy standing next to Bad!Peter and SexFairy!El on the uptown M4.
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I had a pretty sucky day yesterday.  Not only did I lose a huge chunk of my WC/CM fic, I burned up a whole evening trying to attend a political fundraiser (long story, funny - but I don't feel like telling it.  It proves that I am, in truth, an idiot).

So, I get home and find this incredible
comment from [info]shea about how much she loved Part III of my Public Sex fic - and was specific about what worked for her and why (the best type of concrit).  And all the annoyance of the day just slipped away.

One of the reasons why I had sort of abandoned Public Sex was I couldn't figure out how to actually get P/E/N to have sex in the Met - thus filling the prompt.  I know the Metropolitan Museum of Art pretty well, and there's really no place on a Saturday that's out of the way enough for coupling without getting arrested, except maybe a bathroom (and that's really not Public Sex).  

I was also having a hard time (pun intended) with Public Sex because  I was getting too wrapped up in how to fit the story into canon.  Truth of the matter - when it comes to PWP, do canon details REALLY MATTER?

So, anyway.  Shea writes this wonderful comment on how much she loves Sex!Fairy El - and everything clicks.  Since El is the catalyst for the kink, she needs tell the meat of the story (the sex) from her own POV.  I started Part IV at 9 pm, and worked steadily until nearly 1:45 am, did a quick edit (and not a very good job of it, I hate to say - major grammar cleanup in Aisle 3 this morning). 

I don't know where the story came from - it sort of wrote itself.  I usually work all the details out in my head before commiting them to text - but this one (like my Aftermath fic) sprung full blown, like Athena from the head of Zeus.  Shea was the hammer that cracked my skull opened.  If you like Part IV of Public Sex (A/K/A New York, New York), please be sure to thank her.


 


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Title: New York, New York - It’s a Helluva Town – Part IV
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan 
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: White Collar
Characters:  Peter Burke, Elizabeth Burke, Neal Caffrey, New York City
Spoilers: None
Summary: Public Sex Kink!Meme Prompt Reply - Claimed
Warnings/Triggers: Some Necessary Roughness
Word Count: ~2000
Disclaimer: If I owned Peter Burke, Elizabeth Burke and Neal Caffrey, don’t you think they’d be wearing a lot less clothes?

Author's Notes )

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In Dappled Sunlight Off the 79th Street Transverse )
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Previous Parts )

Additional Notes )
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Title: New York, New York - It’s a Helluva Town – Part III
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan 
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: White Collar
Characters:  Peter Burke, Elizabeth Burke, Neal Caffrey, New York City
Spoilers: None
Summary: Kink!Meme Prompt Reply - Claimed
Warnings/Triggers: Public Sex - On A Bus, In A Museum
Word Count: ~800
Disclaimer: If I owned Peter Burke, Elizabeth Burke and Neal Caffrey, don’t you think they’d be wearing a lot less clothes?
Author's Notes )

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Kissing in Public...And Negotiations )
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Title: New York, New York - It’s a Helluva Town
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: White Collar
Characters:  Peter Burke, Elizabeth Burke, Neal Caffrey, New York City
Spoilers: None
Summary: Kink!Meme Prompt Reply - Claimed
Warnings/Triggers: Public Sex - On A Bus, In A Museum
Word Count: ~2400
Disclaimer: If I owned Peter Burke, Elizabeth Burke and Neal Caffrey, don’t you think they’d be wearing a lot less clothes?

Unbeta’d and deschmooped from the Kink!Meme posting. Given the positive feedback from my beloved flist, I’m going to finish this first (Neal in Paris, bedamned).

Prompt Reply
El has a kink. She loves to have dirty sex in public places and Bad!Peter is always willing to indulge her. The hire Rentboy!Neal for a frolic. Extra points for dirty talk and sex in a really refined place like The Cloisters or the Metropolitan Museum of Art. Double bonus for Peter in leather.

 A/N: Slightly A/U - since Neal has a working tracker, and I have the feeling the tracker’s off for Season 2. I couldn’t manage to get Neal as a male prostitute, the story kept turning into something that [livejournal.com profile] kelly_girl wrote (In Between the Lines) a while back. So, we’ve got Dom!Peter, SexFairy!El, and Sad!Neal all set to have sex...on a bus, in a museum, in the park, on the terrace of June’s house.


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In the Dendur Pavillion )
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Title: New York, New York - It’s a Helluva Town
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: White Collar
Characters:  Peter Burke, Elizabeth Burke, Neal Caffrey, New York City
Spoilers: None
Summary: Kink!Meme Prompt Reply - Claimed
Warnings/Triggers: Public Sex - On A Bus, In A Museum
Word Count: ~3800
Disclaimer: If I owned Peter Burke, Elizabeth Burke and Neal Caffrey, don’t you think they’d be wearing a lot less clothes?

Unbeta’d and deschmooped from the Kink!Meme posting. Given the positive feedback from my beloved flist, I’m going to finish this first (Neal in Paris, bedamned).

Prompt Reply
El has a kink. She loves to have dirty sex in public places and Bad!Peter is always willing to indulge her. The hire Rentboy!Neal for a frolic. Extra points for dirty talk and sex in a really refined place like The Cloisters or the Metropolitan Museum of Art. Double bonus for Peter in leather.

 A/N: Slightly A/U - since Neal has a working tracker, and I have the feeling the tracker’s off for Season 2. I couldn’t manage to get Neal as a male prostitute, the story kept turning into something that [livejournal.com profile] kelly_girl wrote (In Between the Lines) a while back. So, we’ve got Dom!Peter, SexFairy!El, and Sad!Neal all set to have sex...on a bus, in a museum, in the park, on the terrace of June’s house.


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Riding the Uptown Bus )

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