White Collar Ficlet - No Release (MMOM Day 2)

[elrhiarhodan]

Title: No Release
Author: elrhiarhodan
Fandom: White Collar
Written For: MMOM 2013 – Thirty-One Dirty Words – Prompt 002 – Hand
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Peter Burke, Neal Caffrey (Peter/Neal)
Spoilers: NONE
Warnings/Enticements/Triggers: Slavery, implied prior abuse, implied prior non-con
Word Count: ~425
Summary: A brief continuation of the Master/slave A/U started in A Familiar Command, Peter asks Neal to do something that he no longer thinks possible.

A/N: Written for my dearest friend coffeethyme4me, who once politely requested more in this ‘verse but never pressured me for it.

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“Touch yourself.”

Neal shivered at Peter’s command. His right hand reached towards his groin, the journey slow, torturous. He cupped his hand around his cock, waiting for the next order.

“Good.” Peter circled him, boot heels clicking against the marble floor.

Long ago, Neal had perfected the ability to pretend desire, to make his masters believe that he wanted everything they did to him. Until his last master, that deceit kept him alive, and if losing the ability to feel pleasure, it was a small enough price to pay.

He’d been here for a week, or so he calculated against the times he rose and was tended to. In this time, Peter had demanded nothing of him. Not until this evening, when he was brought back to the great hall, clad in nothing more than a white linen tunic that the servants removed before they departed.

Peter was there, a demon or a god in black leather. Neal tried not to look at him, tried not to see the man that replaced his boyhood friend. He kept his eyes on the white marble, brilliant in its purity, reflecting the sun that poured through the clerestory windows.

Neal was convinced there was no desire of this man that he couldn’t satisfy. Until Peter gave him a most treacherous command: “I want you to enjoy yourself.”

He hesitated. Self-pleasure had been forbidden, a terrible crime that could mean amputation or death.

“Neal?”

He hated when Peter – his Master – said his name, especially like that; with so much love and concern. He hated the lies in that tone as much as he feared the truth of it. Neal kept his head bowed when Peter stepped in close. He didn’t look up when Peter took his hand and stroked his thumb against the heavy calluses that decorated his palm, relics from the time he spent in the mines.

That single, gentle touch kindled something Neal had thought long dead. He wanted to weep, he wanted to snatch his hand away, he wanted to rest his head against Peter’s thigh and forget about the last ten years. He did none of those things; instead remaining passive, the perfect slave.

Peter rubbed something onto his hand, smoothing it over the calluses. “This should make it better for you.” He placed Neal’s hand over his crotch, curling his fingers around his flaccid cock. “Can you do this for me? Can you learn to enjoy your body again?”

Neal would try, if just to please Peter, to satisfy his Master’s desire.

FIN or maybe TO BE CONTINUED

Comments

[theatregirl7299]

Ooooo. Very nice! Now I want more of their backstory.

Loved the subtle sensuality of the piece. Neal's willingness to give Peter what he thinks Peter wants and then Peter turning the tables on him.

Great job.

[elrhiarhodan]

Yes, there will eventually be a complete backstory here.

And we know that Neal will do anything and everything for Peter.

[kanarek13]

Oh, so good ♥ The image of Peter dressed in black, the power AND love for Neal pouring from every word of this ficlet is more than enough to make me shiver with delight. It's like the master/slave dynamics were created for them...

I opt for the TBC option :P

Thank you :D (I love the month of May :D)

[elrhiarhodan]

Yes, yes - I have always loved the idea of Peter in the ultimate power outfit - black leather (complete with riding boots.

I AM SO SHALLOW.

[kanarek13]

The shallow end of the pool is the best place ever. We have drinks with tiny umbrellas and quick access to bunks :P

[sapphire2309]

This is so heartbreaking and so sexy at the same time. I don't know how you do it, but it's so UNF!

[elrhiarhodan]

Thank you so very much. It seems that my PWP skills really flower in the Merry Month of Masturbation.

[sapphire2309]

I'm not too sure about the WP part of PWP. This story sounds like it may have a plot hidden there somewhere. *hint* *hint* I really hope you continue this, even if it's years later.

[ladyrose42.livejournal.com]

Eliminate the "maybe" before the "to be continued" PLEASE.
You say so much in such short stories. I just want more.

[elrhiarhodan]

Thank you!

[coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com]

Oh I love it! That he gives him lube and closes his hand around it and calls him Neal... It's wrong (but I love it). <33

[elrhiarhodan]

Thank you...and no, it's not wrong to love that. It's perfectly right.

[lmichelle599.livejournal.com]

Yes, this needs to be continued.

[elrhiarhodan]

Thank you. Yes, it does.

[daria234.livejournal.com]

angsty and hot and wonderful

[elrhiarhodan]

Thank you!

[ivorysilk]

This is so sad--and so true to the characters; Neal is always a con artist, and finding his identity has always been his struggle--and Peter knows it.

[elrhiarhodan]

Thank you so very much for this wonderfully insightful comment.

[miri-thompson.livejournal.com]

Oooh! I vote to be continued! Please . . .

[elrhiarhodan]

Yes, yes - it will be continued.

[lauracollared.livejournal.com]

Oooooo me likey.....

[elrhiarhodan]

Thank you!

[sinfulslasher]

ASDFGHJKL!!! *flails*

One, you introduced me to this 'verse, which I didn't know existed until now, and that makes me very happy.

Two, allow me to correct one tiny little thing:
FIN or maybe TO BE CONTINUED

There. That's better.

[elrhiarhodan]

I was thinking about writing the story for the WC BB - it's going to be a daunting task. It's at least 40-60k.

So for now, content thyself with pornish snippets.

[sinfulslasher]

I was thinking about writing the story for the WC BB

YES YOU MUST DO THIS! I COMMAND YOU!!! *makes impatient grabby hands*

What do you need? Cheerleading? Back rubs? Foot massages? Chocolate cake? Juicy carrots for the plunneh? Alpha reading? Beta reading? Brainstorming sessions? Nekkid Matty photos? PLAIN OL' BRIBERY?! I'm your gal for any and all of the above!

[palombaggia.livejournal.com]

oh...I hadn't read this one....please please continue for the WCBB.
Yes!
I really want to know about their backstory...

[elrhiarhodan]

Thank you so very much.

The backstory - that'll take about 40k to write.

[palombaggia.livejournal.com]

please please do it!!!! and congrats for your work on MMOM.

[atmc35.livejournal.com]

will there be more to these story? would love to read more between them

[elrhiarhodan]

Thank you!

Yes, there will be - at some point - a continuation of this 'verse.

[wise-old-crone.livejournal.com]

Baby, you are trying to kill me here *swoon*

[elrhiarhodan]

Thank you, and yes I am.