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Title: Monday Morning
For: MMOM - Thirty (One) Dirty Words - Prompt 016 - Whip
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan
Fandom: White Collar
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Peter Burke (Peter/Elizabeth/Neal)
Spoilers/Episode References: None
Warnings/Enticements/Triggers: None
Word Count: 300 Exactly
Summary: Waiting for his order has never been quite so pleasurable.

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It was sleeting outside, and Peter wanted something a little heartier than a double espresso. “Venti caffe mocha, please.” He smiled at the barista and moved over to wait for his order. He felt a little out of it – but in a good way. Loose-limbed, buzzed, ready to face the day.

Last night was … exceptional.

He had sat back in a comfortable chair in Neal’s new loft and watched as his lover laced El into the blue velvet corset. Her hair was pinned up, leaving her neck and breasts on display. As Neal pulled the laces tight, Elizabeth’s breaths got shallower, her pupils dilated and she shifted her thighs back and forth.

“She’s all ready for you.”

Peter went to his wife, who was standing there like a captive slave girl. He ran a leather-gloved hand down her body, pausing at her lush breasts, before cupping her sex.

“Do you want me to fuck you, wife?”

El clamped her thighs tight around his hand, and he could feel the burning heat, but not the moisture that was slicking up his glove. She rocked against him, fucking herself against his intruding fingers.

That was his answer.

He pulled out the riding crop stuck down the back of his pants and replaced his fingers with it, letting El masturbate against the braided leather.

In his peripheral vision, Peter something moving – Neal’s hand and arm sliding up and down. The little shit was beating off while watching him torment Elizabeth.

Good.

He pulled the crop out and El shrieked in pleasure. He raised his arm to smack her ass with it.


“Whip, sir?”

Startled, Peter shook his head. “What?”

“Whip cream on your caffe mocha?”

“Umm, yeah. Sure.” Peter smiled.

Starbucks, a hard-on. What a nice way to start a Monday morning.

FIN


Date: 2011-05-16 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elainasaunt.livejournal.com
I am laughing so hard right now. Hot AND funny.

Date: 2011-05-16 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lionessvalenti.livejournal.com
Oh man, this is gorgeous and funny and really hot. And this:
“Do you want me to fuck you, wife?”

OH FUCK. CAN I SAY YES TOO?

Date: 2011-05-16 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidchild67.livejournal.com
*laughs hysterically*

Also, I just love this line for some reason: "Do you want me to fuck you, wife?" It sounds so dirty in my head!

Date: 2011-05-16 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladydragoness.livejournal.com
I'm against the StarBucks, simply because I don't drink coffee, but a definite "hell yes" to the rest of it. Especially the corset.

Date: 2011-05-16 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sonia6349.livejournal.com
Thank you, I needed this one. *lights cigarette*

Date: 2011-05-16 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
LOL!!!! It was so very hot, and then it was so very funny. Love that combination!!! Kudos to you. :-D

Date: 2011-05-16 09:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
Thanks! Snagged it from RC earlier. I think it suits my writing of them! :-D I adore how Peter is sort of over him, pinning him there with his Domy energy.

Date: 2011-05-16 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com
HAHAHAHA

Oh Peter.

Wouldn't mind a continuation of that hot scene lol.

That was very luscious :)

Date: 2011-05-16 09:44 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-05-16 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afiawri.livejournal.com
Do you want me to fuck you, wife?

This. This line all over. Just how... distant but close it is. How commanding and loving and hot and cold and everything in just how he addresses her. <3 <3

Date: 2011-05-16 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
“Whip, sir?”

I LOL'd. :-)

Date: 2011-05-16 11:28 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] samueljames
Fantastic.

Date: 2011-05-16 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penguingal.livejournal.com
LMAO! Love it!

Date: 2011-05-17 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashfanatic22.livejournal.com
LOL! Hot, sexy, and funny! Peter is so perverted! :D

Date: 2011-05-17 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] surreal-44.livejournal.com
Every time I went to review this yesterday, I got interrupted, but it's been on my mind since I read it.

I don't even know where to begin. I love Dom!Peter as much as I love sub!El (which there is just not enough of), and this was fabulous and hot and yes, funny.

I really, really need to see how this all unfolded because, gah. Hot. Bunk. Bye. &hearts

Date: 2011-05-18 06:27 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lokifan
LOL, fantastic!

Date: 2011-05-19 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hoosierbitch.livejournal.com
Ahahahahahahahaha!

That was GLORIOUS! Oh, lordy. Lordy lordy lordy.

You're awesome.

Date: 2011-05-24 11:00 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ladygray99
:D Dirty and a laugh.

Date: 2012-05-09 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pooh-collector.livejournal.com
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