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I had to cut this, when I realized that P/E/N doing seriously heavy petting in public would be tabloid and Internet fodder.  I can't reuse it, since it's pretty scene specific, so I thought I'd share with my beloved flist:


Peter cupped the back of Neal’s skull, his strong hands massaging his scalp. Neal writhed like a cat against the caress and kissed Peter like his life depended on it. Maybe it did.

The three of them sat there in the Temple courtyard. Elizabeth panted as she watched Peter and Neal kissed more and more passionately, biting and licking at each other, oblivious to the crowd that had gathered around them. Neal trying to work his hand under Peter shirt, his sketchpad fallen to the floor – forgotten. Peter was so far gone that he started to unbutton Neal’s vest.  Elizabeth was working at his tie.


Date: 2010-03-31 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deedo-2313.livejournal.com
Ooohh I seriously love you for posting this 'outtake'!!!

Yum!!

Date: 2010-04-01 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hoosierbitch.livejournal.com
Ooooooh. SO LOVELY. Thanks for sharing the outtake!!

Date: 2010-04-01 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misura.livejournal.com
Although I suppose I can see why you cut this scene (when I'm, yanno, back to having the capability for rational thought), I also feel this was way too delicious to end in a trashcan, forgotten.

Loved it. <3

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