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Title: Somewhere Over The Rainbow
Author: [livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan
Prompt: White Collar 100 #30 - Girlfriend
Fandom: White Collar
Rating: PG
Characters: Neal Caffrey, Kate Moreau; Neal/Kate
Spoilers/Episode References: Hints of 2.11, Forging Bonds
Warnings/Enticements/Triggers: None
Word Count: Exactly 300!
Summary: Even when they had nothing, they had everything.

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Whenever Neal sees a rainbow, he remembers a day he had with Kate – one of the most perfect of his life.

They were struggling – their money gone, barely making the rent. But Neal managed to scrape together enough for a trip to the Botanical Gardens. They took subways and buses and by the time they arrived, the warm spring day had turned cool and windy. A storm was threatening now – but Kate didn’t want to turn back. They wandered through the gardens – Neal found a cluster of bluebells – they weren’t nearly as blue as Kate’s eyes. Kate pointed out a raft of irises – and they couldn’t help but say “Van Gogh” at the same time.

As they explored, it began to pour without warning. They didn’t bother to run inside, taking shelter under an ancient oak. Neal cloaked Kate with his body, but keeping her dry was a pointless effort. Spring storms in New York are intense – deluging everything in their path. He looked down at her, she was like a drenched kitten – her lips curled in laugher, her huge blue eyes framed by eyelashes wetly clumped into star-shaped fans, and he thought this is the woman I need to spend the rest of my life with.

And just a quickly as the storm came, it rolled away and Kate’s smile grew impossibly bigger.

“Look, Neal!”

He turned around – the sun was pouring out from behind the dark remnants of the storm clouds, the light catching the drops still in the air and a full rainbow blossomed, arching across the sky. As he caught his breath in wonder, Kate whispered to him.

“Make a wish, Neal.”

He did – he wished that this happiness would never end.

But like the rainbow, their joy was too ephemeral to last.

FIN


Note: Inspired by a prompt from [livejournal.com profile] photoash, Over the Rainbow.

Date: 2011-02-20 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
You're such a great writer! I'm not into Neal/Kate, but I *am* into Neal/Happiness, and you gave him that. :-)

Date: 2011-02-20 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
I'm torn about whether I want Kate to have been "bad". For the people that like her a lot, great, great friends of mine, I want for her to have been good and wonderful, because I want them to be happy and to get to squee. But for myself, I think if she *is* made out to be treacherous, as you say, she'd make a much more interesting (to me) character, and right now I have not a lot of interesting or liking.

At any rate, I love the picture you've painted here!

Date: 2011-02-20 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
So gorgeous and sad.

Date: 2011-02-21 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jrosemary.livejournal.com
Gorgeous, Elr! I am madly envious of your ability to bring a scene to life with a few well-chosen descriptive phrases, like:

. . . her lips curled in laugher, her huge blue eyes framed by eyelashes wetly clumped into star-shaped fans . . .

And then you there's the emotional impact! Well done.

Date: 2011-02-21 01:40 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ladygray99
Oh My.

I'm not a huge Neal/Kate fan but you just made them and this moment so beautiful.

Thank you.

Date: 2011-02-21 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidchild67.livejournal.com
Beautiful! I love Neal in love.

Date: 2011-02-21 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
I have not a lot of interesting? LOL!

Date: 2011-02-22 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afiawri.livejournal.com
Wow. I think you captured the tone of the Neal/Kate canon scenes really well and did better than doing them justice - you gave this a transience and so bittersweet with how small the moment could be next to all the things Neal and Kate got up to. I love this, so much, you have no idea.

Neal/Kate

Date: 2011-02-28 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deepbluemermaid.livejournal.com
Hey Elr, I have a question for you. I got inspired during Promptfest V to write a porny story for you, featuring a kink you mentioned having. But time and other fannish endeavours intervened, and I've only just gone back to writing it recently.

Thing is, it makes most sense for the sex scene to involve Neal/Kate, but you've mentioned not being a fan of the pairing. My fic is essentially Neal's memory of a very hot sexual encounter that took place years ago, early in their relationship.

So would it be cool with you if I kept it as Neal/Kate? If not, I could tweak things to make it Neal/OFC.

Re: Neal/Kate

Date: 2011-02-28 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deepbluemermaid.livejournal.com
Sorry, just to double-check: is that a 'yes please' to Neal/Kate or to Neal/OFC?

Re: Neal/Kate

Date: 2011-02-28 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deepbluemermaid.livejournal.com
Excellent :) I'm hoping it will be done by the weekend, once I get my friend to beta it.

Re: Neal/Kate

Date: 2011-03-13 08:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deepbluemermaid.livejournal.com
The Neal/Kate story I wrote for you is finally done:

http://deepbluemermaid.livejournal.com/162744.html

I hope you like it :)

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