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The Reunion – The Playground

The still winter-cold ground and the surprising warmth of the early spring morning met in a dense, swirling fog. It was late enough that all the school buses had picked up and delivered their precious cargo, but still too early for the day-to-day residential traffic. Still, Neal drove slowly along the wide, tree-lined streets, nostalgia and a concern for safety keeping him well below the speed limit.

There was his old elementary school, and he pulled over for a minute. The classrooms were lit and he could see small bodies at their desks. Much the same and yet not the same. Even from this distance he could see the computers and the smartboards and all the trappings of modern technology. A security guard – another new thing – approached. It probably wasn’t a good idea to be hanging around a school in a rental car.

“Everything okay, mister?”

He smiled. “Fine – I went to school here, many years ago. Just waxing nostalgic.” No need to lie.

The guard was polite but firm when he asked him to leave.

Neal pulled out and followed the road as it wound through the neighborhood. His old house, the one on Merry Lane was unrecognizable. Aunt Ellen had sold it when she retired for good, this time to Florida. Neal wondered who was living there now – if they were the ones who added a story and redid the landscaping, turning it into just another MacMansion on a street filled with oversized, overly ostentatious homes.

A right turn, a left at the third stop sign, then another left, and he was at his other home, the Burkes’ place. And like the Merry Lane house, new owners had added on, refaced, remodeled to the point of ridiculousness. Peter’s parents were long gone, too.

Neal sighed. Well, it’s not like you really wanted to go back, is it?

He drove aimlessly, melancholy chasing him from street to street and memory to memory, until he found himself at a familiar place. A ballpark and a playground. The fog lingered here, gathering in the hollows and open spaces, wrapping around jungle gyms and slides and swing sets. The park was quiet, eerily so, the fog muffling everything but the screams of drifting seagulls and the creak of chains. Neal brushed a finger against the damp metal. Another memory teased at his brain, swings and a boy…

“I though I’d find you here.” A voice – familiar, beloved, interrupted his recollection. He turned around. A man in a rumpled beige trench coat strode through the mist. Neal smiled.

“How did you?”

“Lucky guess.”

“Didn’t think you were going to make it.” Neal commented.

“Wouldn’t miss this for the world, you should have known that.”

“What did you do, tell the AUSA it was your thirtieth high school reunion? She get the trial postponed for you?”

“Nah, the Dutchman’s so-called lawyer rolled. He said that Hagen had given him orders to kill the book dealer, even gave him the means to do it. Provided dates and times and locations for the rest of the bond forgery plan. Apparently Hagen decided to cut a deal, too. He’s rolling on some bigger fish – the ones who commissioned the counterfeit Canadian hundreds. Trial’s over.”

“Nice.” Neal gave the swing a little push. “Pity though.”

“Why?”

“Would have liked to have had my testimony on record.”

“They’ll be other cases, there are always other cases.”

“Yeah, I know – but unlike White Collar, Art Crime rarely goes to trial. And the Bureau frowns upon active-duty agents testifying as experts in civilian matters.” He sighed, disappointed.

“You’re forty-six and head of the Art Crimes Division. I don’t think you need to worry about your resume.”

Neal had to grin, Peter was right. But then, he usually was, but he couldn’t resist tweaking Peter. “Better than mortgage fraud and bank scams any day.” They both chuckled. Neal added, “Saw Moz and El last night. Do you believe that their eldest is graduating high school next month??”

It was Peter’s turn to laugh. “You’ve got to be kidding me! And to think, El never wanted kids in the first place."

“Well, you know how persuasive Moz can be.”

“There’s obviously a reason why he calls himself a Machiavellian puppet master.”

“Wonder if they’ll ever get married.” Neal mused.

“If El wanted a ring on her finger, believe me, there’d be one there by now.” Peter spoke with the assurance of a old friend.

They walked around the playground. The slide was new – colorful plastic modules instead of aluminum polished by the passage of small, denim clad bottoms. The whirligig was gone – probably the victim of one too many lawsuits.

“I always liked this playground.” Peter commented. “Had a lot of fun here.”

Neal nodded in agreement. “It seems so much smaller, though. Memory plays tricks like that.”

They circled back to the swings. Neal gave into the urge and sat down. It wasn’t uncomfortably small, but a little too low to the ground. “I think I’m too tall for these. Too old, too.”

Peter, standing behind him, snorted in agreement, and then stopped.

“What’s the matter?”

“Just a memory.”

“A good one?”

“Yeah – I think.”

“You think?”

“I don’t know if it’s real, or something I imagined.” Peter looked off into the distance. “Must have been six years old. Was here – at the swings. Someone from school – I can’t remember his name – had pushed this little kid to the ground.”

Neal felt his heart race – this was the memory he’d been chasing before. “And you told him off – I think you threatened to tell everyone that he still wet the bed.”

“Yeah – that’s it!” Peter shook his head, incredulous. “That was you – that little kid was you?”

“I can’t believe it – that was you. How could I have forgotten that?” Neal tilted his head back, looking up at Peter. “That’s a little – ” Neal couldn’t think of the word.

“Scary?”

Neal tried to swing, but just ended up scuffing his shoe. “Hard to believe, but I guess we were always meant to be friends.”

“Friends, yeah.” Peter agreed, with a wry twist of his lips. He bent over and kissed Neal, kissed the wonder into him, kissed the lingering melancholy away. Thirty years on, Peter still kissed like a conqueror, and yet he kissed with the tenderness of a husband and lover. And friend. “Wanna push?”

“Sure, why not?” Neal stretched out his legs and leaned back. Peter’s hand gripped the chain above his. The last of the mist was burning off, and the early morning sun caught the gold of their matching wedding bands.

The sky was bright blue and the day promised to be spectacular.

FIN


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Date: 2012-03-31 04:43 am (UTC)
sahiya: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sahiya
This is a delightful story - sad in some places, but really just outstanding. I loved the way you used the different White Collar characters and how recognizable they all were, even in this very different context. Awesome work!

Date: 2012-03-31 12:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
Quite simply, this is probably -- if not my very favorite -- one of my absolute favorite stories of yours. You really bring their canon selves to your own complex, interesting, beautiful world, and I just can't even tell you how honored I feel to be let into that world, to really give this story my time and energy and to get to live in it throughout the process of its becoming.

This version of Peter and Neal will live in my heart forever. Thank you for that.

<3

Date: 2012-03-31 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] micheleeeex.livejournal.com
This was amazing, fantastic and shall be bookmarked so I can read it again & again. I loved this!

Date: 2012-03-31 02:21 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kanarek13
Absolutely brilliant! Oh, thank you so much for this treat... I honestly can't remember the last time I stayed up all night reading, but here I am, it's past 4 AM and my head is spinning with excitement \o/

The image of Peter and Neal still together after all these years - so beautiful and so perfect *happy sigh*

Thank you. You've made my day... night...dawn? :D

Date: 2012-03-31 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyrose42.livejournal.com
Excellent as always. It's nice to see a kidfic go from kid to adultfic and even a happy ending. El and Mozzie - nice! Kate got about as many lines as she did in the show, and I just now realized it and didn't miss her. Weird. Off to bed with sweet dreams. Thank you again.

PS The link to the Epilog did not work, it took me to 404 Dreamwidth.
The link in my e-mail worked. Computers-the love/hate relationship

Date: 2012-03-31 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauracollared.livejournal.com
I.... wow. I don't even know what to say. This is an absolutely amazing story. So heartbreaking, so real. So in character. Chapter 5 is just so wonderful. Their happiness at being together.... how much they are just freaking enjoy each other's bodies and their love of each other. Wow. This is an all-time fave for me, hands down.

Date: 2012-03-31 03:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teaboyfan.livejournal.com
You really are amazing. I usually avoid kid!fic like the plague, but I knew your take on it would be awesome. The Big Four were beautifully in character, of course, but what you did with Fowler and Kramer cracked me up. They would be horrible kids. And now it's after 11:30 here and I still have to empty and reload the dishwasher. But it was time well spent!

Date: 2012-03-31 08:07 am (UTC)
saphirablue: (Peter and Neal)
From: [personal profile] saphirablue
This is beautiful! So very beautiful!

Thank you very much for this! :)

Date: 2012-03-31 11:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nieseryjna.livejournal.com
That was great, I really loved the way you transitioned them from kids to adults, and I loved Neal's relationship with Peter's parents. Not to mention I simply adore how you portray both Neal and Peter in all those years, and fantastic El and Moz.

Date: 2012-03-31 11:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jrosemary.livejournal.com
I'm so glad I decided to read this (just read your warnings carefully and read around my triggers.) Peter's boneheaded way of trying to protect Neal just about broke my heart, but it's a perfect example of 'teenage logic.' And the epilogue is just gorgeous--I'll always have the image of Peter pushing Neal on the swing now! Brilliant job with this, Elr. Congrats!

Well worth the SQUEEE!

Date: 2012-04-01 10:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebeneezerdark.livejournal.com
Loved this AU! Beautiful the way all the nasty folks (Fowler, Adler, Kramer -- "Phil the Pill", snicker! -- Keller...) came to bad ends, and Neal as AIC for Art Crimes!! *grin* Peter and Neal, happily married and together 30+ years! ::bounces with glee::

One thing, though: the link to the Epilogue on the Dreamwidth site crosspost is broken; had to switch over here to LJ to finish it.

Date: 2012-04-02 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daniel-shadow.livejournal.com
This story is jsut amazing!! So touching and beautiful.

Date: 2012-04-02 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sylaine.livejournal.com
This. This is just... I don't even know - amazing, beautiful, heartbreaking (I had tears in my eyes during the Adler parts and the break up), wonderful and lots of other adjectives describing how great this is. Even with a different background you still make them sound like Neal, Peter, Mozzie & El.

Date: 2012-04-02 07:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elainasaunt.livejournal.com
Well, well. This is just spectacularly good. True confessions time: kidfic, with very few exceptions, makes me break out in hives.

It goes without saying, I hope, that this is one of those rare exceptions.

My school years weren't exactly the best time of my life, but your descriptions succeeded in making me a bit nostalgic. Oh, and I LOL'd over this: But it really didn’t matter, they were seven and they bonded over great art. And titties. Yeah, I know. I'm twelve.

Date: 2012-04-03 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] droodlebug.livejournal.com
That was a most satisfying treat. Thank you for sharing the visions from your head. :)

Date: 2012-04-04 05:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pooh-collector.livejournal.com
Wow! Simply wonderful. I absolutely love the fact that our gang was still our gang, Moz with his sarcasm and his Russians, Neal with his vulnerability and his loyalty, El with her wisdom and grace, Peter with his need to protect and his sometimes awkward social skills.

This was a wonderful ride that got better and better as it went along.

And I really do hope those Russians put an end to MK.

Date: 2012-04-04 08:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheenianni.livejournal.com
This was amazing. I love how all your characters were still the same people as in canon, just in a different situation. And you’ve also managed to fulfill my secret wish – I always wanted to read a fic where Peter and Neal are the same approximately age and friends (or more) from the very beginning. (Well, I imagined them meeting at college or something along these lines, but this worked for me as well)

Moments I loved (except for the whole fic, of course :D):

- Peter the little hero even as a small boy when he saved Neal at the playground
- Neal and Mozzie bonding over art and tits :D (can’t help it, that was just so classy :D)
- I loved that Moz ended with El (a rare pairing, and you pulled it off fantastically)
- I enjoyed Ellen as Neal’s stepmother (kind of), and it was a nice twist that Neal’s father wasn’t a dirty cop for once
- Adler the perv – ueee! I love your brain! Poor Neal, cheers for Friend!Peter and his big-hearted, smart, kind parents who are simply good people. That whole arch was fantastic
- poor Peter angsting about Neal finding out he was gay (and obsessed with Neal) – and poor Neal when Peter pushed him away
- Mozzie was about to destroy the photos either way – that one made me really happy
- Phil the Pill – interesting. Yeah, while I’m not completely on board that he’s Devil Incarnate, I can see him that way as a child. You gave me a lot to think about. BTW, that whole arch was amazing as well – and Peter shined again, standing up for Mozzie and going all protective for him and Neal. Loved it!

Peter! Neal! Mozzie! El! Loved them all in the story.

There’s only one thing missing for me – and that’s that I’ll now always wonder what happened between the Russians and Keller :D

Thank you for this truly amazing piece of art!

Date: 2012-04-04 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidchild67.livejournal.com
Wow - just wow. You said this was one of your best and you weren't lying.

I was taking turns crying and laughing - on the train no less. This is simply one of the best things I have read in a long time, and you ought to be proud of yourself. Well done!

Date: 2012-04-06 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joy2190.livejournal.com
Great fanfic! Loved so many parts of it. (Peter getting to third base with Diana - a hoot!) I loved Moz and Elizabeth as a couple.

When I first watched WC it never struck me as plausible that Neal was straight nor Peter for that matter. I thought it was going to be about a gay couple. So disappointing that only Lauren/Diana are out, though thankfully not as comic relief. I wish USA would forget about the anti-homophobia rhetoric and actual have an openly gay lead. Your fic made up for it though!

Date: 2012-04-11 08:29 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-04-09 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
This is fantastic! I like how you used what happened with Vincent Adler as a vital plot point later. *hugs Neal* Lovely use of El and Moz -- it was sort of weird to see a universe in which Peter wasn't madly in love with El, but I like that she ended up with Moz instead. Made me smile.

Date: 2012-04-11 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gnomi.livejournal.com
I absolutely adored this whole story. I figured I'd read a chapter or so before falling asleep last night, and next thing I knew it was 12:30 AM and I was reading the epilogue. It was so detailed and so true to the characters we see on screen, but at the same time you have created a complete, rich history for these alternate versions of them. I loved all the small details, the flickers of canon in this AU. And I just wanted to hug small Neal and let him know that Peter would always be there for him.

Date: 2012-04-11 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyrose42.livejournal.com
Yea! We always want more!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2012-07-22 03:04 am (UTC)
buefo: (Matt Bomer)
From: [personal profile] buefo
This was absolutely adorable, heartbreaking, hot, and sweet. I have so much love for it, I can't even. There was so much heart and feeling in all of the details -- it's one of those stories that you read and think, "This author must be a really good person."

And omg, I can SO see high school Moz saying, “Shut your pie hole, jerkwad.” LOL. Perfect.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing. <3

Wonderful!

Date: 2012-09-23 08:18 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This is the first ever fan fic I have read and I am in love with it! Absolutely brilliant! Thank you for sharing!

Date: 2012-07-09 11:30 am (UTC)
embroiderama: (White Collar - Neal & Peter handsome)
From: [personal profile] embroiderama
So, I just finally got around to reading this, though I'd read some of the later stories in this 'verse, and it was so awesome. I love the way Peter and Neal were such good friends before they became boyfriends, and their mutual angst about coming out was wrenching even though I knew it would end well. Beautiful work.

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