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The Reunion – The Playground
The still winter-cold ground and the surprising warmth of the early spring morning met in a dense, swirling fog. It was late enough that all the school buses had picked up and delivered their precious cargo, but still too early for the day-to-day residential traffic. Still, Neal drove slowly along the wide, tree-lined streets, nostalgia and a concern for safety keeping him well below the speed limit.
There was his old elementary school, and he pulled over for a minute. The classrooms were lit and he could see small bodies at their desks. Much the same and yet not the same. Even from this distance he could see the computers and the smartboards and all the trappings of modern technology. A security guard – another new thing – approached. It probably wasn’t a good idea to be hanging around a school in a rental car.
“Everything okay, mister?”
He smiled. “Fine – I went to school here, many years ago. Just waxing nostalgic.” No need to lie.
The guard was polite but firm when he asked him to leave.
Neal pulled out and followed the road as it wound through the neighborhood. His old house, the one on Merry Lane was unrecognizable. Aunt Ellen had sold it when she retired for good, this time to Florida. Neal wondered who was living there now – if they were the ones who added a story and redid the landscaping, turning it into just another MacMansion on a street filled with oversized, overly ostentatious homes.
A right turn, a left at the third stop sign, then another left, and he was at his other home, the Burkes’ place. And like the Merry Lane house, new owners had added on, refaced, remodeled to the point of ridiculousness. Peter’s parents were long gone, too.
Neal sighed. Well, it’s not like you really wanted to go back, is it?
He drove aimlessly, melancholy chasing him from street to street and memory to memory, until he found himself at a familiar place. A ballpark and a playground. The fog lingered here, gathering in the hollows and open spaces, wrapping around jungle gyms and slides and swing sets. The park was quiet, eerily so, the fog muffling everything but the screams of drifting seagulls and the creak of chains. Neal brushed a finger against the damp metal. Another memory teased at his brain, swings and a boy…
“I though I’d find you here.” A voice – familiar, beloved, interrupted his recollection. He turned around. A man in a rumpled beige trench coat strode through the mist. Neal smiled.
“How did you?”
“Lucky guess.”
“Didn’t think you were going to make it.” Neal commented.
“Wouldn’t miss this for the world, you should have known that.”
“What did you do, tell the AUSA it was your thirtieth high school reunion? She get the trial postponed for you?”
“Nah, the Dutchman’s so-called lawyer rolled. He said that Hagen had given him orders to kill the book dealer, even gave him the means to do it. Provided dates and times and locations for the rest of the bond forgery plan. Apparently Hagen decided to cut a deal, too. He’s rolling on some bigger fish – the ones who commissioned the counterfeit Canadian hundreds. Trial’s over.”
“Nice.” Neal gave the swing a little push. “Pity though.”
“Why?”
“Would have liked to have had my testimony on record.”
“They’ll be other cases, there are always other cases.”
“Yeah, I know – but unlike White Collar, Art Crime rarely goes to trial. And the Bureau frowns upon active-duty agents testifying as experts in civilian matters.” He sighed, disappointed.
“You’re forty-six and head of the Art Crimes Division. I don’t think you need to worry about your resume.”
Neal had to grin, Peter was right. But then, he usually was, but he couldn’t resist tweaking Peter. “Better than mortgage fraud and bank scams any day.” They both chuckled. Neal added, “Saw Moz and El last night. Do you believe that their eldest is graduating high school next month??”
It was Peter’s turn to laugh. “You’ve got to be kidding me! And to think, El never wanted kids in the first place."
“Well, you know how persuasive Moz can be.”
“There’s obviously a reason why he calls himself a Machiavellian puppet master.”
“Wonder if they’ll ever get married.” Neal mused.
“If El wanted a ring on her finger, believe me, there’d be one there by now.” Peter spoke with the assurance of a old friend.
They walked around the playground. The slide was new – colorful plastic modules instead of aluminum polished by the passage of small, denim clad bottoms. The whirligig was gone – probably the victim of one too many lawsuits.
“I always liked this playground.” Peter commented. “Had a lot of fun here.”
Neal nodded in agreement. “It seems so much smaller, though. Memory plays tricks like that.”
They circled back to the swings. Neal gave into the urge and sat down. It wasn’t uncomfortably small, but a little too low to the ground. “I think I’m too tall for these. Too old, too.”
Peter, standing behind him, snorted in agreement, and then stopped.
“What’s the matter?”
“Just a memory.”
“A good one?”
“Yeah – I think.”
“You think?”
“I don’t know if it’s real, or something I imagined.” Peter looked off into the distance. “Must have been six years old. Was here – at the swings. Someone from school – I can’t remember his name – had pushed this little kid to the ground.”
Neal felt his heart race – this was the memory he’d been chasing before. “And you told him off – I think you threatened to tell everyone that he still wet the bed.”
“Yeah – that’s it!” Peter shook his head, incredulous. “That was you – that little kid was you?”
“I can’t believe it – that was you. How could I have forgotten that?” Neal tilted his head back, looking up at Peter. “That’s a little – ” Neal couldn’t think of the word.
“Scary?”
Neal tried to swing, but just ended up scuffing his shoe. “Hard to believe, but I guess we were always meant to be friends.”
“Friends, yeah.” Peter agreed, with a wry twist of his lips. He bent over and kissed Neal, kissed the wonder into him, kissed the lingering melancholy away. Thirty years on, Peter still kissed like a conqueror, and yet he kissed with the tenderness of a husband and lover. And friend. “Wanna push?”
“Sure, why not?” Neal stretched out his legs and leaned back. Peter’s hand gripped the chain above his. The last of the mist was burning off, and the early morning sun caught the gold of their matching wedding bands.
The sky was bright blue and the day promised to be spectacular.
Go to Chapter Five - Part 2 <- ::: -> Go to Masterpost
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Date: 2012-03-31 04:43 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-03-31 12:42 am (UTC)This version of Peter and Neal will live in my heart forever. Thank you for that.
<3
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Date: 2012-04-05 03:20 pm (UTC)Thank you, again and again.
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Date: 2012-03-31 01:51 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-05 03:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-03-31 02:21 am (UTC)The image of Peter and Neal still together after all these years - so beautiful and so perfect *happy sigh*
Thank you. You've made my
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Date: 2012-04-05 03:28 pm (UTC)I do have to say that I went into the writing with the image of Peter and Neal in the park with the morning sun shining on their wedding bands as the ending. I knew I wanted them to be together many years down the line. So hearing that that worked really makes my day.
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Date: 2012-03-31 03:36 am (UTC)PS The link to the Epilog did not work, it took me to 404 Dreamwidth.
The link in my e-mail worked. Computers-the love/hate relationship
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Date: 2012-04-05 03:29 pm (UTC)I think your computer problems stemmed from the fact that I was changing the links just as you were going from one part of the story to another.
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Date: 2012-03-31 03:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-05 03:32 pm (UTC)Chapter 5 should have been titled, "This Shit Gets Real." One of the things I loved the most about writing was being able to pull out all of my own high school memories. Not just the zeitgeist, but the angst and the worries - large and small - that go into the mind of the average high school kid. Even having a relatively privileged background doesn't mean that everything is sunshine and roses.
So very glad that you liked this, and that you took the time to let me know.
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Date: 2012-03-31 03:44 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-05 03:35 pm (UTC)I really did indulge myself in making all of the White Collar villains rather ineffectual bullies. Fowler pees the bed, Kramer smells and cheats, Adler actually gets the chance to be a REAL villain.
So glad you enjoyed this, it was truly a labor of love to write.
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Date: 2012-03-31 08:07 am (UTC)Thank you very much for this! :)
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Date: 2012-04-05 03:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-03-31 11:16 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-05 03:59 pm (UTC)So glad to know that my efforts paid off.
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Date: 2012-03-31 11:38 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-05 04:00 pm (UTC)I will be happy to send you a Bowdlerized version if you want, because if you simply avoided the entirely of the second part of Chapter 5, you missed a lot of really important plot stuff.
And I do think the ending - the entire epilogue - is some of my favorite writing yet.
Again, thank you!
Well worth the SQUEEE!
Date: 2012-04-01 10:04 am (UTC)One thing, though: the link to the Epilogue on the Dreamwidth site crosspost is broken; had to switch over here to LJ to finish it.
Re: Well worth the SQUEEE!
Date: 2012-04-05 04:01 pm (UTC)Will go fix the link now.
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Date: 2012-04-02 03:48 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2012-04-02 01:58 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-05 04:02 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-02 07:12 pm (UTC)It goes without saying, I hope, that this is one of those rare exceptions.
My school years weren't exactly the best time of my life, but your descriptions succeeded in making me a bit nostalgic. Oh, and I LOL'd over this: But it really didn’t matter, they were seven and they bonded over great art. And titties. Yeah, I know. I'm twelve.
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Date: 2012-04-05 04:24 pm (UTC)I have to confess - the whole paragraph about Neal and Moz bonding over great art and titties is my favorite part of the whole story. Which means that I'm like - 12 too?
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Date: 2012-04-03 05:16 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-05 04:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-04 05:04 am (UTC)This was a wonderful ride that got better and better as it went along.
And I really do hope those Russians put an end to MK.
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Date: 2012-04-05 04:34 pm (UTC)I'm not sure what's happened to Keller.
ponders, not for the first time, a reunion timestamp
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Date: 2012-04-04 08:05 am (UTC)Moments I loved (except for the whole fic, of course :D):
- Peter the little hero even as a small boy when he saved Neal at the playground
- Neal and Mozzie bonding over art and tits :D (can’t help it, that was just so classy :D)
- I loved that Moz ended with El (a rare pairing, and you pulled it off fantastically)
- I enjoyed Ellen as Neal’s stepmother (kind of), and it was a nice twist that Neal’s father wasn’t a dirty cop for once
- Adler the perv – ueee! I love your brain! Poor Neal, cheers for Friend!Peter and his big-hearted, smart, kind parents who are simply good people. That whole arch was fantastic
- poor Peter angsting about Neal finding out he was gay (and obsessed with Neal) – and poor Neal when Peter pushed him away
- Mozzie was about to destroy the photos either way – that one made me really happy
- Phil the Pill – interesting. Yeah, while I’m not completely on board that he’s Devil Incarnate, I can see him that way as a child. You gave me a lot to think about. BTW, that whole arch was amazing as well – and Peter shined again, standing up for Mozzie and going all protective for him and Neal. Loved it!
Peter! Neal! Mozzie! El! Loved them all in the story.
There’s only one thing missing for me – and that’s that I’ll now always wonder what happened between the Russians and Keller :D
Thank you for this truly amazing piece of art!
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Date: 2012-04-05 05:04 pm (UTC)The best type of reviews are getting fed back my favorite bits. And you've done that brilliantly!
Thank you again.
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Date: 2012-04-04 08:35 pm (UTC)I was taking turns crying and laughing - on the train no less. This is simply one of the best things I have read in a long time, and you ought to be proud of yourself. Well done!
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Date: 2012-04-05 05:05 pm (UTC)And thank you! For running with the idea of the fest, for making it a reality and for reading this, of course.
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Date: 2012-04-06 01:36 am (UTC)When I first watched WC it never struck me as plausible that Neal was straight nor Peter for that matter. I thought it was going to be about a gay couple. So disappointing that only Lauren/Diana are out, though thankfully not as comic relief. I wish USA would forget about the anti-homophobia rhetoric and actual have an openly gay lead. Your fic made up for it though!
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Date: 2012-04-11 06:57 pm (UTC)I've always maintained that if WC was on Showtime, the slash would be canon.
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Date: 2012-04-11 08:29 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-09 03:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-11 06:56 pm (UTC)I had toyed with OT3, but it didn't feel right. This was a Peter/Neal story all the way, and if El wasn't going to end up with them, she was going to have Moz.
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Date: 2012-04-11 02:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-11 06:55 pm (UTC)This is probably my favorite story of the year, and maybe my favorite story to write ever - or at least in the top ten.
I'm working on a bunch of timestamps - to fill in some holes in the story. Moz and El, Peter and Neal coming out, what really happens to Matthew Keller, how awesome and kickass Diana is. It's such a fun A/U, I'm reluctant to give it up.
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Date: 2012-04-11 06:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-07-22 03:04 am (UTC)And omg, I can SO see high school Moz saying, “Shut your pie hole, jerkwad.” LOL. Perfect.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing. <3
Wonderful!
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Date: 2012-07-09 11:30 am (UTC)no subject
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