:) I finally watched Kingsman last month and then was bummed that no one was squeeing any more since the film isn't new. Though of course some people are - I actually got into several ships through fanfic and fanvids before seeing the film, which is why I watched. But I'm happy you're into Kingsman too!
This is great. It fits totally well with Neal's backstory. Obviously Neal would fail the dog test and it's so IC that he secretly feels relieved - and that Merlin feels relieved for him too. Love that he doesn't want to leave on a lie. And I LOVE that Harry starts out as mark and ends up as mentor. tbh that's what I want to see most if you're looking for future ideas (or, you know, porn would be fine too). I also like the part about Merlin scaring Neal at first and also his line to Neal about staying out of trouble too - if you're looking for more ideas, I like the idea of Merlin finding stern but effective ways of telling Neal to knock it off (like when in the film he told Eggsy to get rid of the chip on his shoulder - but maybe for Neal it's cockiness or maybe it's also a chip on his shoulder).
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Date: 2017-08-13 07:07 pm (UTC)This is great. It fits totally well with Neal's backstory. Obviously Neal would fail the dog test and it's so IC that he secretly feels relieved - and that Merlin feels relieved for him too. Love that he doesn't want to leave on a lie. And I LOVE that Harry starts out as mark and ends up as mentor. tbh that's what I want to see most if you're looking for future ideas (or, you know, porn would be fine too). I also like the part about Merlin scaring Neal at first and also his line to Neal about staying out of trouble too - if you're looking for more ideas, I like the idea of Merlin finding stern but effective ways of telling Neal to knock it off (like when in the film he told Eggsy to get rid of the chip on his shoulder - but maybe for Neal it's cockiness or maybe it's also a chip on his shoulder).
Anyway, this was delightful :)