I'm bad (really really bad) at giving feedback - witness the fact this story is nearly ten chapters long now and this is my first comment. Having said that I am completely in love with this AU and can't wait to read each chapter. I even like Lauren, so I hope Peter doesn't permanently damage her. Apologize, you stubborn ass! I love your Neal and Elizabeth characterizations too. I can't wait to see your Mozzie. And if that isn't enough, there is the writing itself. Lush, descriptive and completely capturing my imagination. Bravo!
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Date: 2010-07-27 01:51 am (UTC)