Fin? Are you kidding me? That is really a cruel thing to do, ending the story here. Everything worked out in your story. Loved how you made Neal coming to terms with his relationship with Adler, I could really feel how hurt he had been (been there, done that...) and loved that he finally opened up to a relationship with Peter.
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Date: 2014-04-30 08:38 pm (UTC)That is really a cruel thing to do, ending the story here.
Everything worked out in your story. Loved how you made Neal coming to terms with his relationship with Adler, I could really feel how hurt he had been (been there, done that...) and loved that he finally opened up to a relationship with Peter.