Oh wow!!!! I'm again amazed by the wonderful AU's lately and this is again one to love and never want to end. There will be more, right? I mean, this has so much potential, so much to tell. When I finished reading, I wanted more right then.
The setting is awesome. I'm really amazed how you use the characters from the show - keeping them in character - but creating them in a different setting. I love how you invented Neal's story here. And of course I love Peter and Neal meeting under those tense circumstances and then Peter going to see Neal and then saving his life and taking him in, protecting him. I love the angst here because it's so exciting and you can try to figure out what you have in mind for this story by reading it.
I love those Peter/Neal AU's so much. It's not that I dislike El, on the contrary, she is in the story, but I love her to be Peter's ex (mean me, huh? :D). Well, it's just that I adore Peter/Neal and reading them get together is always so much fun, it's my guilty pleasure.
So, now that I rambled here so much, do I get a sequel soon? *making puppy dog eyes*
I know you have so much to write, and I'm looking forward to anything from you, but I can't wait what will happen here next.
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Date: 2013-12-04 02:22 pm (UTC)The setting is awesome. I'm really amazed how you use the characters from the show - keeping them in character - but creating them in a different setting. I love how you invented Neal's story here. And of course I love Peter and Neal meeting under those tense circumstances and then Peter going to see Neal and then saving his life and taking him in, protecting him. I love the angst here because it's so exciting and you can try to figure out what you have in mind for this story by reading it.
I love those Peter/Neal AU's so much. It's not that I dislike El, on the contrary, she is in the story, but I love her to be Peter's ex (mean me, huh? :D). Well, it's just that I adore Peter/Neal and reading them get together is always so much fun, it's my guilty pleasure.
So, now that I rambled here so much, do I get a sequel soon? *making puppy dog eyes*
I know you have so much to write, and I'm looking forward to anything from you, but I can't wait what will happen here next.
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