You know, you always are and will be my favorite writer of P/N slash because you are always coming up with yet another great AU about them. I have them all on my kindle and won't ever delete them because they are special.
This one was much more intense than the others because of that creepy nutcase Adler, whom I already hated on the show. You wrote him just perfect but my heart thudded in my chest a mile a minute imagining Neal lying on his bed all tortured.
You wrote Diana as the Peter-stand-in just perfectly. The case with the Japanese treasure so well written and Daniel Picah a wonderful asset to the story.
Like everyone else as well. The whole thing with the escort business and everything... just wonderfully invented.
Well, and Peter and Neal, again beautiful how they meet, their first night, their feelings hidden because of former disappointments or the fear of rejection. The happy ending as always too short for my romantic heart ;)
Thank you for this epic story full of suspense and romance!!!!
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Date: 2013-07-03 07:49 pm (UTC)Anyway...
You know, you always are and will be my favorite writer of P/N slash because you are always coming up with yet another great AU about them.
I have them all on my kindle and won't ever delete them because they are special.
This one was much more intense than the others because of that creepy nutcase Adler, whom I already hated on the show. You wrote him just perfect but my heart thudded in my chest a mile a minute imagining Neal lying on his bed all tortured.
You wrote Diana as the Peter-stand-in just perfectly. The case with the Japanese treasure so well written and Daniel Picah a wonderful asset to the story.
Like everyone else as well. The whole thing with the escort business and everything... just wonderfully invented.
Well, and Peter and Neal, again beautiful how they meet, their first night, their feelings hidden because of former disappointments or the fear of rejection. The happy ending as always too short for my romantic heart ;)
Thank you for this epic story full of suspense and romance!!!!
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