Date: 2013-04-12 05:22 am (UTC)
This was beautiful! And I loved the weather allegory. Wait, is that an allegory? :/ 9th grade English is failing me. Sorry, Ms. Carroll.

Let me try again...I love Neal's acknowledgement of the weather as a simile to the events of the last few days. Uhhh...yeah.

HUUUGHESSSSSS. ;____;

And I love how you had Neal say/think, "But come Monday morning..." Because that's a phrase he's actually used.

In summation, this was so good! You are so good! I am in awe. <3
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