ZOMG! I just read through this from beginning to end (I think I had read early parts and then lost track?) and WOW WOW I love it. The idea of Neal in that club is delicious, of coruse, but more than that I love the way you show him falling apart and his friends' concern and Peter's longing. And I'm excited to see what happens next.
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Date: 2013-03-28 04:43 pm (UTC)