I loved this. You did a nice job of balancing the issues between the two of them, and then the issues Neal was having at work - which of course can't be totally separated, but I liked the way you handled them.
I was really mad at Peter for a while there at the beginning. He was so dismissive of Neal's feelings about the apartment. Something awful shouldn't have almost had to happen before he started paying attention. But I thought you handled that well, too; of course Neal's safety would mean more to him than his pride.
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Date: 2013-03-18 06:04 am (UTC)I was really mad at Peter for a while there at the beginning. He was so dismissive of Neal's feelings about the apartment. Something awful shouldn't have almost had to happen before he started paying attention. But I thought you handled that well, too; of course Neal's safety would mean more to him than his pride.
Anyway, I really enjoyed it! Thanks!