Date: 2012-12-28 08:13 am (UTC)
This is lovely. You write the characters with so much love.

I am echoing comments above that I love your observations on the characters and I love this look at Neal through Peter's loving eyes.

You captured Neal really well here. He really doesn't ever actually laugh a lot. He has that air of melancholy about him.

I loved Peter's need to go see Neal and him climbing into bed with him even though he could still get sick.

And Neal laughing at Bugs Bunny feels just right.

Thanks for such a sweet story. <3
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