So I saw this posted early today and decided to wait until after I finished my work to just sit, relax and savor. I definitly savored and I already copied it into my Kindle to savor again and again.
I loved Mozzie's take charge attitude with Neal and the way you weaved the the cannon mythology into your own. Keller as a dirty F.B.I. agent was absolutely perfect.
I also could feel that if Keller weren't already dead, well, I can't see Peter killing someone not in the line of duty but Keller would not be happy about encounter.
It's also very believable that Neal would be so afraid, not only for himself but for any potential partners.
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Date: 2012-12-07 10:21 pm (UTC)I loved Mozzie's take charge attitude with Neal and the way you weaved the the cannon mythology into your own. Keller as a dirty F.B.I. agent was absolutely perfect.
I also could feel that if Keller weren't already dead, well, I can't see Peter killing someone not in the line of duty but Keller would not be happy about encounter.
It's also very believable that Neal would be so afraid, not only for himself but for any potential partners.
Thank you for writing the story.