I love everything about it, except Kramer--who manages to be like finger nails on a chalkboard even in print--but even he serves his purpose, getting the wheels of Neal's mind turning (even if they turn in the wrong direction at first).
I thought for certain that Peter was going to stumble upon Neal's pornographic sketches. But it was SO much better this way, with Neal taking a big gamble and freely sharing them, to match the equally big gamble that Peter had taken by telling him the truth. *Squishes them!*
And the ending, with Neal unblocked at last--perfect!
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Date: 2012-10-24 12:25 pm (UTC)I love everything about it, except Kramer--who manages to be like finger nails on a chalkboard even in print--but even he serves his purpose, getting the wheels of Neal's mind turning (even if they turn in the wrong direction at first).
I thought for certain that Peter was going to stumble upon Neal's pornographic sketches. But it was SO much better this way, with Neal taking a big gamble and freely sharing them, to match the equally big gamble that Peter had taken by telling him the truth. *Squishes them!*
And the ending, with Neal unblocked at last--perfect!