This is great - I'm so glad you put up the link in the snowflake post! I love your OCs, here, too. And I love Peter's willingness to give Neal whatever he needs at the end.
And I loved this moment, too:
He had goaded Collins into the beating, to get it on record and use it for leverage. Everything that happened after that was an extension of his original decision. He could live with that.
This feels very much like Neal, to me - he knows how to make hard choices and live with them, and this, as much as the breakdown at the end, felt very true to his character.
And I love protective badass Moz. SO MUCH LOVE for protective badass Moz.
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Date: 2013-01-01 07:35 pm (UTC)This is great - I'm so glad you put up the link in the snowflake post! I love your OCs, here, too. And I love Peter's willingness to give Neal whatever he needs at the end.
And I loved this moment, too:
He had goaded Collins into the beating, to get it on record and use it for leverage. Everything that happened after that was an extension of his original decision. He could live with that.
This feels very much like Neal, to me - he knows how to make hard choices and live with them, and this, as much as the breakdown at the end, felt very true to his character.
And I love protective badass Moz. SO MUCH LOVE for protective badass Moz.