Date: 2012-06-29 04:09 am (UTC)
This made me so very happy!

I thought your plot twist with Neal taking the reins and going after Kuroda was brilliant. Loved the bit with the cell phone and the bugs. I loved the STORY in this story.

Most of all I loved the vulnerability of Neal and Peter, their pain from the way they parted, from their separation, from the reason for their reunion. I love their tenderness, their sensuality, their longing.

I love this 'verse. Love it.
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