This is fantastic! I like how you used what happened with Vincent Adler as a vital plot point later. *hugs Neal* Lovely use of El and Moz -- it was sort of weird to see a universe in which Peter wasn't madly in love with El, but I like that she ended up with Moz instead. Made me smile.
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Date: 2012-04-09 03:25 am (UTC)