Squee! Just consumed the last three installments in as many minutes.
I find it so interesting that El knows something is up here. You could have taken the easy way out and had her not suspect a thing - the next scene could have been Neal making them all breakfast in bed, but you didn't, and that's such a brave story-telling choice. I can't wait to see where you take us with this!
(Please to have Neal really kick ass? Pretty please?)
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Date: 2011-06-19 11:48 am (UTC)I find it so interesting that El knows something is up here. You could have taken the easy way out and had her not suspect a thing - the next scene could have been Neal making them all breakfast in bed, but you didn't, and that's such a brave story-telling choice. I can't wait to see where you take us with this!
(Please to have Neal really kick ass? Pretty please?)