Interesting piece, I liked it and I'm not a Sara fan. (She's a fine actress but I don't get a feeling of chemistry between her and Neal. She seems more like the kind of woman the 'Neal' character/alias is supposed to like, if that makes sense? Almost like a prop to a slick conman named Neal that an actual girlfriend to the 'real' Neal)
I liked that your three dimensional portrayal of their relationship, it's very grown up and real as opposed to what I see in the show. I like her toughness an I understand her reasons for leaving at the end of the story. Thanks.
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Date: 2012-03-28 04:58 pm (UTC)I liked that your three dimensional portrayal of their relationship, it's very grown up and real as opposed to what I see in the show. I like her toughness an I understand her reasons for leaving at the end of the story. Thanks.