What I liked most was your characterization of Sara, and her interaction with Neal--I really like them together, but I don't love them together--and this explains why--there's something about them that seems like it should work but just doesn't. There's none of the spark or passion between them that there should be, that makes you root for a couple, and this fic clarifies that for me. Thanks.
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Date: 2011-03-18 09:22 pm (UTC)