Excellent, excellent. There are so many things I love about this. The teasing, probing, arousing conversation at the beginning; the discomfort and tension of his talk with Rice; all the neat weaving in of canon threads, especially the one about Neal's dad in the scene with El and Peter; and the whole dynamic of the last scene, with the devastating revelation that Sara holds herself responsible, and at last the stripping away of pretense between the two of them. Some of your best work EVER.
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Date: 2011-03-17 12:31 pm (UTC)