I'm completely and totally into this story!!! What an amazing set up, I love this AU, all the little twists and turns you added, be it Neal being El's cousin or Moz being their actual lawyer.
The case is beyond intriguing - there's gotta be a reason behind all the "natural" deaths! And why the hell isn't Neal cooperating?! (other than the fact that Peter would've probably rubbed me the wrong way, too *g*)
Oh, and can I just add one thing? Neal = beautiful wreck = most perfectest description ever!
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The case is beyond intriguing - there's gotta be a reason behind all the "natural" deaths! And why the hell isn't Neal cooperating?! (other than the fact that Peter would've probably rubbed me the wrong way, too *g*)
Oh, and can I just add one thing? Neal = beautiful wreck = most perfectest description ever!
*runs to read part 2*