ext_166134 ([identity profile] daria234.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] elrhiarhodan 2013-05-26 08:14 am (UTC)

I love how you capture the languidness of summer days and slow walks for ice cream. I also like how Peter worries that his happy memories might be painful to hear for Neal but then realizes that Neal wants them anyway. Nicely done.
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