http://healer-twilight.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] healer-twilight.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] elrhiarhodan 2012-07-29 01:30 pm (UTC)

This is EXCELLENT. I can hardly wait for the next bit. Collins has really effed up now hasn't he? Considering all he's done to him, I think a lengthy trial and prison stay is in his future. And I bet the FBI can expect a nice lawsuit from Neal (and Peter). But Neal's gonna have one hell of a difficult recovery ahead, huh?

And I agree with your assesment of Collins' character (in your AN), he really doesn't have much depth compared to Adler or Keller (or the average baddie of the week, for that matter).

But some people are just like that even in real life. I can tell you from personal experiance, when a person feels that much hate for a long time, it consumes them, and they cease to be anything other. Consider those people from that nutball babtist church down south (waynesboro? something like that), the ones that hate EVERYONE... They've been so twisted by hate they don't seem real anymore.

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