These two parts were my absolute favorites:

"You know you are so fucking beautiful. Everyone who looks at you wants to fuck you..." GULP! Uh, yeah. Agreed.

"You aren’t allowed to come, except when you’re riding my cock.” There is something so hot about Peter almost training Neal to come when fucked and no other time. Like, whoa...

Excellent, Elr!!! Fantastic break from school work! ;-)